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Green Shoes by anitadunkl Green Shoes by anitadunkl
No, I'm not satisfied... I hate the colors :noes:

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Reference used: [link] by :iconpariahrisingstocks:

markers and pencil on paper, 30x21 cm

EDIT: well, the scan is a bit better than the photo :-)
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:iconagbuttery:
Hi I want to first tell you that i love this Drawing,however there are two things that you might want to change.First i think you should get rid of the lines under her eyes,the lines look like bags under her eyes. You might want to change the green in her hair to somthing else,i think blue would make the rest of the green really POP.Really Good work! Cheers.ps. I want you to know that the rest of Greenshoes is a very fine work,am thinking if you work more blue and silver in to her hair,down to her shoulder would be awesome.I love her pose.Cheers!
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:iconzergy79:
I love the colors ;) Sie passen zur Stimmung und geben dem Bild einen Vintage touch
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anitadunkl Apr 26, 2013   Traditional Artist
Danke dir :heart:
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:iconlou-in-canada:
i like it! It's got a nice trippy feel to it.. the way she just lays there.. yeah, stoned I would say :lmao:
I love how elegant she is.. those legs, and those shoes! I think it's a wonderful drawing! And I don't mind the colours.. what colours would you have wanted to use, in hindsight? I like too how the background and the colour of her flesh is the same.. she sorta appears out of nowhere.. I like it :woohoo:
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anitadunkl Feb 25, 2013   Traditional Artist
I'm so happy that you like it :heart:. Maybe some red and orange would have been a good idea.
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amoxes Jan 20, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Dam hot !!!
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anitadunkl Jan 20, 2013   Traditional Artist
Hihi, I'm glad that you think so :heart:
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:icontricias:
Wow!!!!.....Lovely one!......Brilliant legs too!!

:iconshoesplz:......Couldn't find green ones;)
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anitadunkl Jan 20, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thank you :heart:
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craig-of-thorns Jan 12, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I like the colors, but for purposes of critique, I think maybe having red hair might make an interesting contrast to the green. Maybe a darker background in brown or a neutral might make the figure pop. It's a great figure and composition though. Love the shoes, the legs, and the swirls of her stockings and hair. (^_^)
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anitadunkl Jan 13, 2013   Traditional Artist
Oh yes, red hair would look great! Thanks for your input :heart:
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