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Green Shoes by anitadunkl Green Shoes by anitadunkl
No, I'm not satisfied... I hate the colors :noes:

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Reference used: [link] by :iconpariahrisingstocks:

markers and pencil on paper, 30x21 cm

EDIT: well, the scan is a bit better than the photo :-)
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:iconagbuttery:
Hi I want to first tell you that i love this Drawing,however there are two things that you might want to change.First i think you should get rid of the lines under her eyes,the lines look like bags under her eyes. You might want to change the green in her hair to somthing else,i think blue would make the rest of the green really POP.Really Good work! Cheers.ps. I want you to know that the rest of Greenshoes is a very fine work,am thinking if you work more blue and silver in to her hair,down to her shoulder would be awesome.I love her pose.Cheers!
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zergy79 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
I love the colors ;) Sie passen zur Stimmung und geben dem Bild einen Vintage touch
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013   Traditional Artist
Danke dir :heart:
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Lou-in-Canada Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   Traditional Artist
i like it! It's got a nice trippy feel to it.. the way she just lays there.. yeah, stoned I would say :lmao:
I love how elegant she is.. those legs, and those shoes! I think it's a wonderful drawing! And I don't mind the colours.. what colours would you have wanted to use, in hindsight? I like too how the background and the colour of her flesh is the same.. she sorta appears out of nowhere.. I like it :woohoo:
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anitadunkl Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013   Traditional Artist
I'm so happy that you like it :heart:. Maybe some red and orange would have been a good idea.
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amoxes Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Dam hot !!!
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013   Traditional Artist
Hihi, I'm glad that you think so :heart:
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
Wow!!!!.....Lovely one!......Brilliant legs too!!

:iconshoesplz:......Couldn't find green ones;)
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thank you :heart:
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craig-of-thorns Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I like the colors, but for purposes of critique, I think maybe having red hair might make an interesting contrast to the green. Maybe a darker background in brown or a neutral might make the figure pop. It's a great figure and composition though. Love the shoes, the legs, and the swirls of her stockings and hair. (^_^)
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Traditional Artist
Oh yes, red hair would look great! Thanks for your input :heart:
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:iconkiukkukissa:
kiukkukissa Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   Traditional Artist
Oh, I love those shoes!
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thank you so much :heart:
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:iconjoeyv7:
joeyv7 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Very cool :iconlovegreenplz:
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:iconluintje:
luintje Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
and i dont think the lines under her eyes suggest a bag, i like it so curly!
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   Traditional Artist
I drew the bags on purpose because I wanted to give her a lazy look :-). It shoul look like she is totally stoned, haha.
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:iconluintje:
luintje Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
hahaha!
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:iconluintje:
luintje Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
i would have done this is in bright kinky colours blue red and yellow... but i love the drawing!
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   Traditional Artist
Yes, in retrospecitve this would have been a good idea :heart:
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Sidh-Art Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Also ich find die Kombination von Blau und diesem Gelb/Grün sehr interessant! :thumbsup:
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013   Traditional Artist
Danke! Es muntert mich auf, dass ein paar Leuten das Bild gefällt :-)
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Sidh-Art Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Hmmmmm, scheinst ja wirklich nicht sehr zufrieden damit zu sein. Aber wie gesagt, ich find es sher ansprechend. Sowohl Motiv, als auch Farbe!
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anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   Traditional Artist
so langsam kann ich mich damit anfreunden... ich kann es eh nicht mehr ändern :-). mir gefällt die figur, also die zeichnung an sich, aber es ärgert mich, dass ich aus den farben noch mehr hätte machen können. aber es gibt immer das nächste bild :-)
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Sidh-Art Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Ich wollt gerade sagen.... auch wenn man nicht zu 100% dahinter steht, hat man zumindest eine Art Lehr-Effekt. :) Aber wie gesagt: Ich find es super. Der Maler selbst hat ja für seine eigenen Werke meist auch einen eigenen Blick... :)
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feldrand Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
amazing - she looks like she is a part of the background... my only point of critics would be the green - in my opinion it could be a touch darker or stronger - but the whole picture is in fact wonderful - the pose and the shoes are perfect... :D
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thank you so much :heart:
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:iconfeldrand:
feldrand Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:sun:
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schachay Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013   General Artist
I like these colors!
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013   Traditional Artist
Really? I'm happy you think so :heart:
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Draw-me-to-death Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so fab
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013   Traditional Artist
Oh, thank you :-)
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Creature-of-Habit88 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I actually like the blue and green combo. :]
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thank you :-)
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:iconimpaled-corpse:
Impaled-Corpse Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Traditional Artist
Hey, the colors are really awesome! You've totally got the 60's-70's trippy album covers feel in this. :clap:
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013   Traditional Artist
I hate the colors :-(. But I'm happy that you like them anyway :heart:
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Impaled-Corpse Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013   Traditional Artist
Love 'em! :love:
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agbuttery Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
good work,I Love the swirls awesome. :clap:
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:iconhello-heydi:
hello-heydi Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lovely swirls
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thank you :heart:
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comteskyee Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
maybe not enough contrast between the background and the character's flesh, otherwise quite interesting
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:iconanitadunkl:
anitadunkl Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013   Traditional Artist
thank you so much :love:
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